The quotes are causing the error messages.
To get a count of files in the directory:
shopt -s nullglob
numfiles=(*)
numfiles=${#numfiles[@]}
which creates an array and then replaces it with the count of its elements. This will include files and directories, but not dotfiles or . or .. or other dotted directories.
Use nullglob so an empty directory gives a count of 0 instead of 1.
You can instead use find -type f or you can count the directories and subtract:
# continuing from above
numdirs=(*/)
numdirs=${#numdirs[@]}
(( numfiles -= numdirs ))
Also see “How can I find the latest (newest, earliest, oldest) file in a directory?”
You can have as many spaces as you want inside an execution block. They often aid in readability. The only downside is that they make the file a little larger and may slow initial parsing (only) slightly. There are a few places that must have spaces (e.g. around [, [[, ], ]] and = in comparisons) and a few that must not (e.g. around = in an assignment.